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October 05, 2005

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Julie

This blog post is very strong. You seem to have analyzed the image carefully and looked at the details as well as the overall image. Your conclusion is very strong and you tied the textbook reference in very nicely. In your introduction, don't forget to underline or bold your thesis next time for extra emphasis. I believe your thesis was the last sentence in the first paragraph and I think it was put together nicely and flowed with the rest of your introduction. On your next post you may want to check your grammar. There were a couple errors in your second and third paragraphs. Using a large vocabulary in your post was good but make sure the words flow and make sense. Overall I thought your post was strong and I enjoyed reading it.

Chelstan Char

This post was written fairly well. You did a good job on "reading" deeply into the image getting down to the smallest details. Your thesis is kind of unclear because it is not bold and/or underlined. While I have little room to judge, I did notice a few gramatical and spelling errors. I can agree with Julie in that it is nice to use big vocabulary words, but its more important that the post flows smoothly so that the reader is focused on the topic and not the random vocab. All in all it was a good post. Keep up the good work.

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